?[Poem]
In the abyss of my soul,
it shall remain under control,
thanks to several thoughts made up by the mind.
Unless the Freudian "I" shall rebel,
and finally takes his side with the weak-
painful body of my own.
Oh, how long the "Am" is going to suffer
from this world brought from above?
Shall cries become rains
so that the sky would recognize
my shouts and pain?
I wrote this poem in: 3/02/2012 / El Gorgeni : IPELSHT .
Chaima Bizani
I like it! :-) Keep going :-)
ReplyDeleteABSOLUTELY breath taking hun .... no wonder it comes from such a talented young artist ... "Shall cries become rains so that the sky would recognize my shouts and pain " ... ooommggggggg chaima ur amazziinngg <3<3<3<3
ReplyDeleteThank you ^^
ReplyDelete@ines , you're exaggerating! :p
i don't think that telling the truth counts as an exageration :***
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